Tourism is the act of travel for the purpose of
not only recreation, but also the provision of services for this act. It might
occupy local services such as entertainment, accommodation and catering for
tourists. It may seem, that tourism brings only benefits, but further
consideration shows that it also has disadvantages.
Generally, many countries depend greatly upon
travel expenditures by foreigners as a source of taxation and as a source of
income for the enterprises. Therefore, the development of tourism is often a
strategy to promote a particular region for the purpose of increasing commerce
through exporting goods and services.
Secondly, it provides a direct employment for the people associated with occupations in bars and hotels. Thanks to it, the average standard of living of people increases well and at the same time unemployment is on the decrease.
However, tourists cause environmental damage
through forest fires, destruction of sand dunes and pollution. Consequently
this serves negatively as increased pollution disturbs local residents and also
it may discourage tourists from further entering the country.
After this, tourism undermines culture by
commercializing it and this is often connected with increasing litter,
graffiti, vandalism and noise - tourists do not always respect traditional
cultures, which is sad but true. In general, tourism is an extremely profitable
process in loads of countries, especially those in which the process of
development continue to depend on this industry because this industry does not
require a lot of literacy and also it yields maximum profit with less
investment.
In short, tourism is a double-edged sword, therefore, a country should develop
tourism accompany with dealing with all
the problems it causes.
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