In the new times, people are so busy and stressed with works, studies,..., so thay need to be supported by new technology advices to decline the pressure of life. There are many new inventions to respond the requests of people such as: laptop, television, computer,...especially smartphone.
Smartphone is a kind of mobile phone but it was upgraded to become more and more convenient by connecting with the Internet.
Firstly, smartphone has enough main functions of mobile phone which are calling and sending massage. Effective community and connection are the best benefits of mobile phone and they are getting more and more rapid as well as modern in smartphone. By using free apps on the virtual stores, you can call and send massage in the free way. The creation of new smartphone is the reason why its popularity extends all over the world.
Secondly, smartphone is so useful for entertainment. The increasing of entertainment industry promotes clips, video, songs,.. to be updated everyday. Therefore, people who use smartphone can kick back their minds in any way they like easily. They can download music from free sources and use their smartphone as a MP3 player. Besides that, once in a blue moon, people can replace TV by smartphone in case they go away. Moreover, smartphone can be used instead of digital camera because it has a function to take a picture as well as take a clip like digital camera. Even though you do not know the way how to fix and change to have the best pictures, you can choose automatic regulation as a solution.
Thirdly, smartphone is also a tool which support you in working and studying. You can search information on websites, you can study on educational apps, you can exchange knowledge as well as experiences with friends all around the world. In work, in case your laptop is too big to carry, smartphone will not make you disappointed by its great speed and ability, it can solve anything like a laptop such as: types texts, send email, prepare power point,.. In study, smartphone is a friend who help student work hard in a comfortable way. They can not only study but also relax when they attend online contests to improve their skills. Especially, smartphone is seemed to be a "dictionary" in view of offline apps for looking up new words. It is really suitable with student also businessman.
In brief, there are many advantages of smartphone which can help you in life but you do not should focus on it so much because it is a virtual normal tool and you can waste los of time if you do not use it effectively. Smartphone is so various, smartphone can run on different operating system like IOS, Android,..I suggest you should bye one for using. In my opinion, despite many other inventions, smartphone is still the most wonderful creation of human.
1. Connect "to" the internet
Trả lờiXóa2. Sending messege
3. "Community" => communication so that it can be equal to "connection" because there's "and" between them.
4. "In case they go away"?
5. Search "for" information
6. Suitable "for"
7. 'And' also bussinessman
8. "Do not should"?
9. "Lots" of time
10. "Bye" one for using?
I guess there're more than 10 mistake as well as misunderstanding in your essay. But you did a good job in general!
Mistakes as well as misunderstandings
Xóa1 vinamilk for u :vvv
Xóatechnology "devices" not advices
XóaThanks so much <3 You drank my milk !
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